Kumiko's second piece "Personal narrative about my mother's education"

Author's note
I like the way my mom brought me up. So I am going to introduce my mom’s education in my 2nd piece. My mom has 5 children including me. Although she has been working as a working woman, she brought up all 5 children as a mother. Always, she entrusted us and gave us many precious experiences. Thanks to mom and dad, we all are fine and doing what we want to.
I am going to introduce my mom’s education based on my experiences.

Thank you Mark for giving me nice feedback.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1asMVkZZBwCpgLAvIQGvkL5pcoGrZaaNRYWSu89uDVuw/edit

Saya's First Piece "My Best Friend"

 
Author's Note:

 This is the personal narrative about my best friend.

The start of our connection sounds strange and odd, but I think we are now the best friend for each other. She is really the best friend for me, and I hope she thinks so. I’ve not showed this to her, because it’s too embarrassing for me now. However, I wish I can show it to her someday.

During the process I wrote this publishing, Jun and Moro gave me the advice. Jun　pointed that I can add photos and Moro advised to change the first sentence. Thank you Jun and Moro!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hKgIZzR1xr_niyqCtFInH4_U9EA4qrk6Uxo8VLG86HY/edit

Jun's first piece "The teaching of my father"

Author's Note:

I wrote a personal narrative about the teaching of my father when I was a child because thanks to parents, I am the person I am now.

After writing this piece, I paused to realize that my way of thinking is based on my parent’s view. I felt I want to obey the teachings of my parents in the future.

While I was writing this piece, my classmates, Moro and Saya, gave me suggestions. Moro gave me some positive comments and pointed out the part that was difficult to understand. So I tried to change some words to be more clearly. And Saya advised me to add my family photo from when I was a child. Thanks Moro and Saya!

This is my first piece↓

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ez5j5JnBaVd1PpQJKQ-s3BeceyqweRu8dR41nK-o_XA/edit