Kumiko's third piece "Haiku on My Travels"

Author's note
My 3rd piece is Haiku on my travel in Middle East countries. I wrote Haiku about UAE, Oman, Egypt, Jordan and Israel with each picture. The Haiku describes each picture, so please look at the picture at the same time reading the Haiku.
It was first time for me to write Haiku in English but it was fun because there are no rules.
Thank you Mark for giving me feedback and chance to write Haiku.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/11lkcQky7ppBLZJbl4cAVkPq_QIYldykmfyAUPHWBFfw/edit

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I could not upload photo of UAE, Egypt and Jordan on Google drive. So I upload them here. Sorry for inconvenient.

UAE

Egypt

Jordan

 

Kumiko's second piece "Personal narrative about my mother's education"

Author's note
I like the way my mom brought me up. So I am going to introduce my mom’s education in my 2nd piece. My mom has 5 children including me. Although she has been working as a working woman, she brought up all 5 children as a mother. Always, she entrusted us and gave us many precious experiences. Thanks to mom and dad, we all are fine and doing what we want to.
I am going to introduce my mom’s education based on my experiences.

Thank you Mark for giving me nice feedback.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1asMVkZZBwCpgLAvIQGvkL5pcoGrZaaNRYWSu89uDVuw/edit

Kumiko's first piece "Travel report in Israel"

Author’s note
It is very difficult to enter and leave Israel. Before visiting Israel, I searched it on Internet very much. Many people stated that it was fearful and troublesome. So, I was afraid of visiting Israel. But you do not have to worry like me. Although you are asked many troublesome and disgusting questions, only thing you have to do is answer them step by step honesty. Now that you know how to enter and leave Israel, you need not be afraid of them.
Thank you Mark and Yumi for giving me nice advices.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hH6MQjQ8htE-FFk-zG3wpQEtVJ9KO478gQtIfN-HrjQ/edit

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1. Make sure you've had at least one other classmate give you feedback for revision and editing.

2. Send me a Google Doc link, and add me as an Editor. Other types of links are fine too. For example, if you want to add your voice or BGM, you can create a YouTube video.

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5. Feel free to keep updating or modifying your piece on Google Docs any time you like!