Sunday, November 11, 2012

Jun's third piece "The evening sun"

Author’s note:
It is a poem about my feeling when I rode a bike in ICU in the evening and saw a very beautiful evening sun.

When I was a child, I wondered why I couldn’t become someone, I am just me. Even now, I sometimes think I want to see my days through someone’s eyes. Especially when I see beautiful aspects, I want to know what someone feels when he/she looks at that. However, it is difficult to know because the person who I want to know his/her feeling is usually in a distance. “You”in this poem mean such a person.



I would like to thank Mark and my roommate, Alyssa, for giving me some comments and pointing out some words I should change.
 

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