Tuesday, November 6, 2012

Risa's second piece

Author's Note:

For my second piece, I wrote my guide to the Tokyo Disney Sea.
I really love Disney Sea, and I go there very often.
Disney Sea is filled with fascination,dreams,and adventure.
It attracts people from little kids to elderly.
As a disney lover, I would like to introduce 7 best things you can ride or see in the Disney Sea on this paper.

I would like to thank Mark and Moro for giving me some advice in order to improve this piece.
https://docs.google.com/open?id=1hI9Uc0TB7Y7mD5kr2_Up9xYNvK0ukrMneYawXVeuWSHlMOp5pfvjisELP-rg

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