Author's Note: It is a cooking report in which I tried to show how to cook, my experience and my feelings through cooking.
I love writing something. I have written diary, story, picture book, essay, report and something like that. However I did not write cooking report. So I want to challenge cooking report through Personal Writing. Also I like cooking. I always cook breakfast, lunch or dinner in the every weekend. I record this cooking because of not forget in the future. If I look at this report in the future, I recall this record and how to cook. I enjoy written this report. But it was also difficult to convey my feelings to other people by writing. I think that it is important for author to convey my experience or feeling to other people. I learned it by writing this report.
Thank you for Saaya, Jun, my friend, my friend's mother and Mark!!
Thank you for Saaya, Jun, my friend, my friend's mother and Mark!!
https://docs.google.com/document/pub?id=1O8qgzgZtaZldgoqUU9cK0qeKPg7AO2mhrgL5fEsBeKE
Congratulations on posting your first piece, Mariko!
ReplyDeleteThank you for being brave as the first student to "publish" on the blog.
I read it again, and this is very delicious writing. I especially like the personal episodes that you include such as your memories or how your boyfriend likes it. If you get a chance or inspiration, it would be fun to expand those paragraphs even more with delicious descriptions of memories related to your favorite dishes.
Also, when you get a chance, please include the names of the classmates who helped you in your Author's note!