This is a travel writing in Indonesia. Last spring vacation, I went to Indonesia with my fellow students of Unesco club. It was study tour; we studied about Indonesia by each person’s view point. We learned about education, science, culture, inheritance and human rights. I did not focus on whole study tour in this writing, but I wrote down what I am the most impressive event while the study tour.
Mariko, Risa and Mark gave me advice. Thank you very much your help.
Saaya, nice description of the observations and emotions you felt as you traveled to Indonesia. You've added some excellent descriptions from the first draft and this is a very valuable piece to share!
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