"Perfection"(Link to a Poem)
by Yu Inoue
Author's Note: My second piece is like a poem about perfection. It seems that we have thought about the issue of perfection once and this is fundamental question for humans. I answered this question by my own way in this piece. Please give me a comment about my thought and I am happy to receive your idea.
Thank you Kan. Kan pointed out the ambiguous expression of second line of my piece in order to enhance its quality. As a result of his advise, my second piece became clear and good. Thank you!
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