"Tranquil Garden"
Author's note:
My 1st piece is the set of 3 poems. These are written with my unconscious, so I don't know the meaning of them. Simply I wrote as I wanted to.
But I like these poems because I think I succeeded a play on words and make the atmosphere of the words unique.
Hisashi gave me comments that point out the influence of the songs I love. I didn't notice it and was surprised that I was unconsciously influenced by my favorite things. The fact helps me to know who I am.
Thanks, Hisashi!
This is a course of free personal expression and creative writing at International Christian University in Tokyo. Each member of the class is an "author" with freedom to choose any theme, genre, format, and length they feel will be meaningful for them. The goal is to develop life-long writers who use English not only as a tool for professions, but as a way for self-expression that can connect and communicate with readers all over the world. Please enjoy and leave comments!
What a strange journey I had reading your work. Most strange. It leaves me clueless. In a good way.
ReplyDeleteGreat expression from the depths of your subconscious. The poems give me an interesting stream of images and feelings. Like Kan, I don't know what they are, but at the end, I feel strangely peaceful.
ReplyDeleteFascinating, the power of words is.