Thursday, November 10, 2011

"Winter has come" by Buchi

Author's note : This is a poem about winter.
First, I began to write a set of haiku; however, it became a poem in spite of my will. I wrote it because I like winter even though it is too cold. I wanted to tell readers that winter is not only a cold season but also warm season in my sense.
I want to say thank you for Mitsuru, who gave me advise about rhymes and Mark, who suggested me to include progressive forms.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mZPf_FUuegHJIkjBPplaot3pX_m54z2im2SiRKzFVfs/edit?disco=AAAAAEIQQL8

1 comment:

  1. Nice lines of poetry detailing your day as a student in Tokyo in winter.

    The last line is the best part. Very warming.

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